From 90d87122bc45d3082d4322f8f06085f71377086b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Michael Telatynski <7t3chguy@gmail.com>
Date: Tue, 16 Mar 2021 11:39:06 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Tweak copy on space creation flows

---
 src/components/structures/SpaceRoomView.tsx     | 14 ++++++++++----
 src/components/views/spaces/SpaceCreateMenu.tsx |  4 ++--
 src/i18n/strings/en_EN.json                     | 10 +++++-----
 3 files changed, 17 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)

diff --git a/src/components/structures/SpaceRoomView.tsx b/src/components/structures/SpaceRoomView.tsx
index 0b0f2a2ac9..17ab75e707 100644
--- a/src/components/structures/SpaceRoomView.tsx
+++ b/src/components/structures/SpaceRoomView.tsx
@@ -369,7 +369,7 @@ const SpaceSetupFirstRooms = ({ space, title, description, onFinished }) => {
     let buttonLabel = _t("Skip for now");
     if (roomNames.some(name => name.trim())) {
         onClick = onNextClick;
-        buttonLabel = busy ? _t("Creating rooms...") : _t("Next")
+        buttonLabel = busy ? _t("Creating rooms...") : _t("Continue")
     }
 
     return <div>
@@ -391,8 +391,14 @@ const SpaceSetupFirstRooms = ({ space, title, description, onFinished }) => {
 
 const SpaceSetupPublicShare = ({ space, onFinished }) => {
     return <div className="mx_SpaceRoomView_publicShare">
-        <h1>{ _t("Share your public space") }</h1>
-        <div className="mx_SpacePublicShare_description">{ _t("At the moment only you can see it.") }</div>
+        <h1>{ _t("Invite people") }</h1>
+        <div className="mx_SpaceRoomView_description">
+            {
+                _t("It's just you at the moment.")
+            } {
+                _t("%(spaceName)s will be even better with others", { spaceName: space.name })
+            }
+        </div>
 
         <SpacePublicShare space={space} onFinished={onFinished} />
 
@@ -610,7 +616,7 @@ export default class SpaceRoomView extends React.PureComponent<IProps, IState> {
                 return <SpaceSetupFirstRooms
                     space={this.props.space}
                     title={_t("What are some things you want to discuss?")}
-                    description={_t("We'll create rooms for each topic.")}
+                    description={_t("We'll create a room for each of them. You can add more later too.")}
                     onFinished={() => this.setState({ phase: Phase.PublicShare })}
                 />;
             case Phase.PublicShare:
diff --git a/src/components/views/spaces/SpaceCreateMenu.tsx b/src/components/views/spaces/SpaceCreateMenu.tsx
index 88098d1b66..ca5b25f128 100644
--- a/src/components/views/spaces/SpaceCreateMenu.tsx
+++ b/src/components/views/spaces/SpaceCreateMenu.tsx
@@ -140,9 +140,9 @@ const SpaceCreateMenu = ({ onFinished }) => {
             </h2>
             <p>
                 {
-                    _t("Give it a photo, name and description to help you identify it.")
+                    _t("Add some details to help people recognise it.")
                 } {
-                    _t("You can change these at any point.")
+                    _t("You can change these anytime.")
                 }
             </p>
 
diff --git a/src/i18n/strings/en_EN.json b/src/i18n/strings/en_EN.json
index 07d292a0e7..e3ccc1794d 100644
--- a/src/i18n/strings/en_EN.json
+++ b/src/i18n/strings/en_EN.json
@@ -998,8 +998,8 @@
     "Go back": "Go back",
     "Your public space": "Your public space",
     "Your private space": "Your private space",
-    "Give it a photo, name and description to help you identify it.": "Give it a photo, name and description to help you identify it.",
-    "You can change these at any point.": "You can change these at any point.",
+    "Add some details to help people recognise it.": "Add some details to help people recognise it.",
+    "You can change these anytime.": "You can change these anytime.",
     "Creating...": "Creating...",
     "Create": "Create",
     "Expand space panel": "Expand space panel",
@@ -2629,8 +2629,8 @@
     "Failed to create initial space rooms": "Failed to create initial space rooms",
     "Skip for now": "Skip for now",
     "Creating rooms...": "Creating rooms...",
-    "At the moment only you can see it.": "At the moment only you can see it.",
-    "Finish": "Finish",
+    "It's just you at the moment.": "It's just you at the moment.",
+    "%(spaceName)s will be even better with others": "%(spaceName)s will be even better with others",
     "Who are you working with?": "Who are you working with?",
     "Ensure the right people have access to the space.": "Ensure the right people have access to the space.",
     "Just Me": "Just Me",
@@ -2642,7 +2642,7 @@
     "Invite by username": "Invite by username",
     "Inviting...": "Inviting...",
     "What are some things you want to discuss?": "What are some things you want to discuss?",
-    "We'll create rooms for each topic.": "We'll create rooms for each topic.",
+    "We'll create a room for each of them. You can add more later too.": "We'll create a room for each of them. You can add more later too.",
     "What projects are you working on?": "What projects are you working on?",
     "We'll create rooms for each of them. You can add existing rooms after setup.": "We'll create rooms for each of them. You can add existing rooms after setup.",
     "Tried to load a specific point in this room's timeline, but you do not have permission to view the message in question.": "Tried to load a specific point in this room's timeline, but you do not have permission to view the message in question.",